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In The Margins Inbox

Free Critiques of Query Packages & Pages

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Need an extra set of eyes on your query material or the initial pages of your manuscript? My inbox is open—a free opportunity I’m calling the In The Margins Inbox! Because writing a book is hard enough alone. And this community reminds me every day what it’s like when authors choose to celebrate and support each other.

Here's the Gist on Free Feedback

I’ll read and leave comments on your query, synopsis/blurb, or first 10 manuscript pages (double-spaced). Send one piece or all three—whatever feedback would be most helpful.​

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If you’d like me to look at more pages or give your material a second look after edits, I would greatly appreciate a small donation to my iced coffee fund so I can keep helping other authors.

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  • For $10: The first 2 chapters (20-ish pages, double-spaced) of a manuscript or a second review of your material

  • For $20: First 50 pages (double-spaced) of your manuscript


Donations are accepted through Venmo, PayPal, or Buy Me a Coffee. Check your inbox after submission for details (may take up to 24 hours for the automated email to reach you).

Ready to Submit?

Just shoot me an email to the following address: callie@breitenbushliterary.com!

Have questions about the process?

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